Thursday, 6 February 2014

Horror Film Rough Cut 2

After presenting our horror opening a second time we still had a lot to work on, and this was the feedback we received from our peers:

WWW:

  • Our typewriter affect as it looked like someone was telling a story
  • The non diegetic sounds went well with the typewriter affect
  • Where we placed the titles as it did not get in the way of anything in the frame 

EBI:

  • Some of our titles was not so low in the frame
  • Our editing was clearer so that our storyline makes sense to our viewers
  • learn how to change music between scenes so that we are not left with harsh endings of non diegetic sound on the transition onto a new scene 

 Here is a link to my second horror film rough copy: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x1QW9cxFCew
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  1. Ms Hiltunen13 February 2014 at 01:31

    You have shot material suitable for the task and use a good range of camera angles. Make sure your titles are consistent and your music is edited so it doesn't end and start abruptly.

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